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 My narration : Strange Affair

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مُساهمةموضوع: My narration : Strange Affair   7/3/2010, 1:13 am

القصه من تأليفى والله و بالانجليزى لانى من عشاق اللغه الانجليزيه

اتفضلو اقراوها و انا هحطلكو كل فترة فصل منها

Let's get started
chapter 1 : No work !

"Ebrahim" : he is an Islamic man , he is from Iraq , he is 35 years old
Though he was in 35 , he wasn't marry .
He still single , he hasn't found the good women so far .
In the morning at 8 O'clock " Ebrahim " is still sleeping .
When he sleep there's a voice wake him .
his mother Mageda : " Ebrahim " "Ebrahim " you man !!
wake up !!! "Ebrahim " Up up up up ( she's clapping )
Ebrahim : In Drowsy voice " good morning "
Mageda : Good morning Lazy !!
and continued " You're too late for work ! You must be going now !
Ebrahim : maaaaaaaam ! It's Friday no work !!
Mageda : Oh !! ya !! I'm So Sorry For This . I forget at all ?
Ebrahim : What !! every Friday you wake me and say OOOOOh
I forgot .Is there anybody forget What day he is live !!
Mageda : Shut Up Asshole !!
Ebrahim : O.k
Ebrahim : I'm So hungry , mother ?
Mageda : Now you said Mother Ha ??
and laughed
Mageda : okay , I'll prepare it . Just wait and hold on ?
Ebrahim : Ok , but please hurry . I have to go to " Mounir " after half hour
to go to Pray !!
Mageda : May god accept it . now close your mouth
and let me do my work !
Ebrahim in laughing : Ok mam
mageda : This is your breakfast !
Ebrahim : What's this mam ?
mageda : waht ??
Ebrahim : Can't you see , Peer good !
Mageda : whaaat !!!! OOOOOOh ?? and laughed
Ebrahim : yaaaaaa !! It's egg, mother ?
You know I do not like it .
Every morning you bring it to me and say " OOOOh ,sorry Iforgot , ha ??
mam , Are you Sick ??
mother : No , Not at all , I'm like a horse
but I'm so sorry for this
Ebrahim in angry : No sorry !! I'll go to " Mounir " and eat
with him .
mageda : okay, do not be late " Hema "
In Exclamation Ebrahim replay : Are you nuts ??
and he slam the door and went out .
Mageda in angry : You are rude !!
After minute she laughed and said : My son ??
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مُساهمةموضوع: رد: My narration : Strange Affair   7/3/2010, 4:14 am

للاسف انا ماعرف اقرا انجلينزي ولكن ترجمتها بعد اذنك اذا تسمحين لي


دعونا نبدأ
الفصل 1 : لا يعملون!
"ابراهيم" : هو رجل الإسلامية ، وهو من العراق ، وقال انه هو 35 سنة
رغم انه كان في 35 ، وقال انه لم يتزوج.
انه لا يزال واحد ، وقال انه لم يعثر على المرأة جيدة حتى الآن.
في الصباح في الساعة 8 o'clock "ابراهيم" لا يزال نائما.
عندما تنام هناك أعقاب صوت له.
Mageda والدته : "ابراهيم" "ابراهيم" كنت رجلا!
أستيقظ! "ابراهيم" لأعلى حتى تصل (انها تصفيق)
إبراهيم : في صوت نعسان "صباح الخير"
Mageda : صباح الخير يا كسلان!
وتابع "كنت متأخرا عن العمل! يجب أن أذهب الآن!
إبراهيم : maaaaaaaam! إنه يوم الجمعة أي عمل!
Mageda : أوه! يا! أنا آسفة جدا لهذا. أنسى على الإطلاق؟
إبراهيم : ماذا! كل يوم جمعة تستيقظ ويقول لي OOOOOh
لقد نسيت. هل هناك جهة ما ينسى يوما انه يعيش!
Mageda : إخرس الأحمق!
ابراهيم : على ما يرام
إبراهيم : لذا أنا جائع ، الأم؟
Mageda : الآن يمكنك ان الأم ها؟
وضحك
Mageda : حسنا ، أنا إعداده. ليس علينا سوى الانتظار وعقد يوم؟
إبراهيم : طيب ، ولكن من فضلك امرنا. اضطررت للذهاب الى "منير" بعد نصف ساعة
الذهاب للصلاة!
Mageda : تقبل الله عليه. الآن إغلاق فمك
واسمحوا لي ان اقوم بعملي!
إبراهيم في الضحك : طيب مام
mageda : هذا هو طعام الفطور!
إبراهيم : ما هذا؟ مام؟
mageda : ماذا؟
إبراهيم : لا يمكن أن تراها ، نظير جيد!
Mageda : whaaat!! OOOOOOh؟ وضحك
إبراهيم : yaaaaaa! انها بيضة ، الأم؟
كنت أعرف أنني لا أحب ذلك.
كل صباح وجهتم لي ويقول "OOOOh ، Iforgot آسف ، ها؟
مام ، هل أنت مريض؟
الأم : لا ، لا ، على الإطلاق ، وأنا مثل الحصان
ولكن أنا آسفة جدا لهذا
إبراهيم في غاضبة : لا آسف! سأذهب الى "منير" ، وأكل
معه.
mageda : حسنا ، لا يكون في وقت متأخر "هيما"
وتعجب إبراهيم اعادتها : هل أنت المكسرات؟
وقال انه يغلق الباب وخرج.
Mageda في غاضبة : انت وقحا!
بعد دقيقة وضحكت وقالت : ابني؟
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مُساهمةموضوع: رد: My narration : Strange Affair   7/3/2010, 10:55 pm

يااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااه ترجمه كمان
انت ذوق والله
اشكرك على الرد والترجمه يا باشا



التوقيع الخاص بلعضو














وَيْكَ يا مَنْ رَامَ تَقْييدَ الفَلَك أىُّ نَجْمٍ في السَّما يَخْضَعُ لَك
وطنُ الْحُرِّ سَمًا لا تُمْتَلَك والفتى الحرُّ بِأُفْقِهِ مَلَك
لا عَدَا يا أرضَ مِصْــرٍ بِكى عَاد إنَّنا دُونَ حِمَاكِى أجمعين
لكِ يا مصــرُ السَّلامة وسلامًا يا بلادى
إنْ رَمَى الدهرُ سِهَامَه أتَّقِيها بفؤادى

واسْلَمِى في كُلِّ حين
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اصداف
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مُساهمةموضوع: رد: My narration : Strange Affair   8/3/2010, 2:27 am

قصــــ جوناناااا ـه

مشكوور على هالذوووق الجميل

سلمتي
دمتي بود

شجون
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مُساهمةموضوع: رد: My narration : Strange Affair   8/3/2010, 3:11 am

Mounir and Ebrahim were living in the same city that called " Baghdad "...
They work in the same kitchen of hotel that called " Elhorya"
At Once "Ebrahim " bell mounir's door.
Mounir : Who's there ?
Ebrahim : Don't panic I'm " Ebrahim "
Mounir : Oh,God !! Not a perfect time ...
Ebrahim : open the door , Don't be fool .
Mounir : okay.wait ?
mounir opened the door!!
Ebrahim : hey mounir , How is live ?
Mounir : Unchanging . Boring as usual .
Ebrahim : OOh !! not to disappoinet you must be patient "mounir"
You are not the one who don't have amoney .. We're level .
Mounir : Are you serious ?? where's the good life , you are promise me to live it " Ebrahim " ?
Ebrahim : Be more patient !!
Mounir : Damn you !!
and they get laughing
Ebrahim :
I've a Surprise for you" mounir " .
Mounir : really !? Waht ??
Mounir : Come on man ! tell me ! I'm begging you...
Ebrahim : O.k O.k. Take it easy ?
I'll tell you , but can we go outdoors .
Mounir : Of Course .
Ebrahim : Our work need two cooker to go to America and work there .
In a hotel that called " Sea Shore " ..
They will give us 900 Dollars every month .. "mounir" "mounir" .. Hey you !!
Mounir : What ?
Ebrahim : Where's your mind ?
Mounir : No !! No !!
Ebrahim : What ??? Are you idiot ? You object to this ,too ?
Do you remember last time you refused Our prize to travel to America ?
That's all for America and the War . It's Over .
Mounir in exclamation : Over ????
Ebrahim : Yes , Over .
Mounir : What about my family , What about my son ?
he was 2 years old ... What's his guilt in his life ?
What about .....................etc ?
A calm and quiet time
Ebrahim : I'm sorry , mounir ?
It's Our opportunity
It's the last chance for us .... Ebrahim left Mounir's house ..and
Ebrahim bell mother's door
Ebrahim : maaaaaaam !!
I know I was rude with you in the mourning , please forgive me !!
Now Open the door !!
mother , come on !!
Mom !! and still belling the door more and more
He cried outdoors because he knew what happened for his mother .
He broke the door and found his mother was killed by American Soldiers ...
Her blood was everywhere and she still bleeding ...
Ebrahim : maaaam!! please , Don't do this me ?? please...
Don't leave me alone ??
I'm begging you mother , please ...
and he shouted : Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
Now I alone with my shame , mother
forgive me
mother , I'll be lost without you
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and he cried too much next to her body ...
Ebrahim , Mounir and all of people prepared for her condolence
And the Idea of traveling to America It's gonna be fall
in Ebrahim's mind ....


And Ebrahim prepares to sale the house ......
and live with " Mounir " after her mother's Killed ...

And he said : If Only you come again , I'll be in your Obey ....
but It's Impossible .....
and he left the house
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التوقيع الخاص بلعضو














وَيْكَ يا مَنْ رَامَ تَقْييدَ الفَلَك أىُّ نَجْمٍ في السَّما يَخْضَعُ لَك
وطنُ الْحُرِّ سَمًا لا تُمْتَلَك والفتى الحرُّ بِأُفْقِهِ مَلَك
لا عَدَا يا أرضَ مِصْــرٍ بِكى عَاد إنَّنا دُونَ حِمَاكِى أجمعين
لكِ يا مصــرُ السَّلامة وسلامًا يا بلادى
إنْ رَمَى الدهرُ سِهَامَه أتَّقِيها بفؤادى

واسْلَمِى في كُلِّ حين
الرجوع الى أعلى الصفحة اذهب الى الأسفل
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وصل للابداع
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مُساهمةموضوع: رد: My narration : Strange Affair   8/3/2010, 3:51 am

من جد قصه جميله والى الامام دائما
واتمنى لك التوفيق

بس انا عتدي اقتراح انك تحطين الجزء الثاني من القصه في موضوع مستقل غير هذا الموضوع
يكون افضل واحسن يعني اول قصه كتبتها يكون الموضوع الجزء الاول والقصه الثانيه تكتبين الجزء لثاني وهكذا الى اخره هذا مجرد رأي..... واتمنى يعجبك رايي


وهذي الرتجمة القصه

منير ابراهيم وكانوا يعيشون في نفس المدينة التي تسمى "بغداد"...
كانوا يعملون في المطبخ في نفس الفندق الذي يسمى "Elhorya"
في مرة واحدة "ابراهيم" لمنير جرس الباب.
منير : من هناك؟
إبراهيم : لا تقلق أنا "إبراهيم"
منير : يا إلهي! ليس الوقت المثالي...
إبراهيم : فتح الباب ، لا يمكن خداع.
منير : okay.wait؟
منير فتحت الباب!
إبراهيم : يا منير ، وكيف نعيش؟
منير : لا يتغير. مملا كالمعتاد.
إبراهيم : أوه! لا disappoinet يجب ان نتحلى بالصبر "منير"
أنت لست واحدا من الذين ليس لديهم.. amoney نحن المستوى.
منير : هل أنت جاد؟ أين حياة جيدة ، وكنت وعد لي في العيش انها "ابراهيم"؟
إبراهيم : كن أكثر صبرا!
منير : اللعنة عليك!
ويحصلون على الضحك
إبراهيم :
لقد مفاجأة بالنسبة لكم "منير".
منير : حقا!؟ ماذا؟
منير : تعال رجل! أخبرني! أنا كنت التسول...
ابراهيم : على ما يرام O.k. أعتبر أن من السهل؟
انا اقول لكم ، ولكن يمكننا أن نذهب في الهواء الطلق.
منير : بالطبع.
إبراهيم : إن عملنا حاجة اثنين طنجرة للذهاب الى أمريكا والعمل هناك.
في الفندق الذي يطلق عليه "شاطئ البحر"..
انهم سوف تعطينا 900 دولار شهريا.. "منير" "منير".. يا أنت!
منير : ما هي؟
إبراهيم : أين عقلك؟
منير : لا! لا!
إبراهيم : ما هي؟؟ هل أنت غبي؟ كنت تعترض على هذا ، أيضا؟
هل تذكرين آخر مرة قمت فيها رفض الجائزة لدينا للسفر إلى أميركا؟
هذا كل شيء بالنسبة لأميركا والحرب. الامر قد انتهى.
منير في تعجب : أكثر؟؟؟
إبراهيم : نعم ، وعلى مر.
منير : وماذا عن أسرتي ، وماذا عن ابني؟
كان 2 سنة... ما هو ذنب له في حياته؟
ماذا عن..................... الخ؟
ووقت الهدوء والسكينة
إبراهيم : أنا آسف ، منير؟
انه لدينا فرصة
انها الفرصة الاخيرة بالنسبة لنا.... منير ابراهيم ترك منزل و..
إبراهيم الأم جرس الباب
إبراهيم : maaaaaaam!
وأنا أعلم أنني كنت وقحا معك في الحداد ، يرجى أن يغفر لي!
الآن افتح الباب!
الأم ، هيا!!
أمي! ومازال belling الباب أكثر وأكثر
صرخ في الهواء الطلق لأنه كان يعرف ما حدث لأمه.
وكسرت الباب ووجدت والدته قد قتل على يد الجنود الأمريكيين...
الدم كانت في كل مكان ، وانها لا تزال تنزف...
إبراهيم : maaaam! من فضلك ، لا تفعل هذا لي؟ الرجاء...
لا يتركني وشأني؟
أنا كنت التسول الأم ، الرجاء...
وصرخ : Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
أنا الآن وحده مع زملائي العار ، والأم
اغفر لي
الأم ، سوف تفقد أكون بدونكم
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وصرخ الكثير المقبل لجسدها...
ابراهيم ، منير ، وجميع الناس على استعداد لبلدها تعزية
وفكرة السفر إلى أمريكا هو سيصبح الخريف
في ذهن ابراهيم....


وابراهيم يستعد لبيع المنزل......
والعيش مع "منير" بعد مقتل والدتها...

وقال : فقط إذا كنت تأتي مرة أخرى ، سأكون في اوبي بك....
لكن الامر مستحيل.....
وغادر المنزل
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مُساهمةموضوع: رد: My narration : Strange Affair   8/3/2010, 3:59 am

بس انا من راى انو مش ينفع ليييييييييييه ؟؟
علشان مدوخش الاعضاء ومدوخش الزوار ايا كانو

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وَيْكَ يا مَنْ رَامَ تَقْييدَ الفَلَك أىُّ نَجْمٍ في السَّما يَخْضَعُ لَك
وطنُ الْحُرِّ سَمًا لا تُمْتَلَك والفتى الحرُّ بِأُفْقِهِ مَلَك
لا عَدَا يا أرضَ مِصْــرٍ بِكى عَاد إنَّنا دُونَ حِمَاكِى أجمعين
لكِ يا مصــرُ السَّلامة وسلامًا يا بلادى
إنْ رَمَى الدهرُ سِهَامَه أتَّقِيها بفؤادى

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مُساهمةموضوع: رد: My narration : Strange Affair   8/3/2010, 4:01 am

واو التكمله للقصه مره حلووووو

مشكوره اناملك الحلوه

وان شاء الله المزيد من القصص والافكار

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مُساهمةموضوع: رد: My narration : Strange Affair   8/3/2010, 4:04 am

Mrs.English كتب:
بس انا من راى انو مش ينفع ليييييييييييه ؟؟
علشان مدوخش الاعضاء ومدوخش الزوار ايا كانو

وده مجرد راى ههههههههههههه

بس استاذنك فى كلمات خطا ف الترجمه ....

معليش اسف اذا ترجمتها غلط ولاكن في اعضاء مايعرفون يقرأون انجلينزي فترجمتها انا اقول انك تطين القصه بالانجلينزي وبالعربي بيكون افضل علشان ماتطلع فيها اخطاء اذا ماعليك امره

واتمى لك التوفيق ياجميل......
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مُساهمةموضوع: رد: My narration : Strange Affair   8/3/2010, 4:18 am

ماشي يا معلم ... كمل الترجمه عادى خلاص نو بروبليم و اهلا باهل السعوديه كلهم بس والله مش بعرف اقرا بعض كلماتكو ههههههههههههههههههه لو سمعتها افهمها بس لو قراتها مفهمهاش هههههههههههههه حبايبي



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وَيْكَ يا مَنْ رَامَ تَقْييدَ الفَلَك أىُّ نَجْمٍ في السَّما يَخْضَعُ لَك
وطنُ الْحُرِّ سَمًا لا تُمْتَلَك والفتى الحرُّ بِأُفْقِهِ مَلَك
لا عَدَا يا أرضَ مِصْــرٍ بِكى عَاد إنَّنا دُونَ حِمَاكِى أجمعين
لكِ يا مصــرُ السَّلامة وسلامًا يا بلادى
إنْ رَمَى الدهرُ سِهَامَه أتَّقِيها بفؤادى

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مُساهمةموضوع: رد: My narration : Strange Affair   8/3/2010, 4:26 am

ههههههههههه

افتحلك مترجم واعلم اياها خخخخخخخ
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مُساهمةموضوع: رد: My narration : Strange Affair   12/3/2010, 11:31 pm

Chapter 6 : Hello !! America
Ebrahim decide to go America . The life never stopped .

He must do something good in his life ..

He try with " Mounir " by all means but in vain ..

He determine to go America and he prepared for travel and go a broad ..

On the plane , He thought about his mother and leaving his best friend " Mounir " ...

After landing , He went out of the airport and he did not believe himself ...

Ebrahim : Woow !! I didn't believe myself !! I'm in the big city ???
I'm in new york ...??

He went to his friend " Saleh " and still with him in his flat ...

Ebrahim bell saleh's door ..
Saleh : Who's Out ha ??

Ebrahim : " Saleh " !! It's me " Ebrahim " ... Open the door..

Saleh : " Ebrahim " !! and Opened the door , and continued : OOOOh !!
Ebrahim I miss you so much !! Welcome to America .
I even expected you !!
but when you late I fell Hopeless
But It doesn't matter , you're here with me now !!
I can't believe myself man !!
When did you come ?
Ebrahim : I miss you ,too . but Forgive for my late
I had some troubles
Saleh :What's matter ? tell me !Line up !!
With crying : My mother is died ...
I mean killed .

Saleh : Oh my gosh ? I'm so sorry ...
No body lived forever , god only

And he placate him ....

Saleh : yes , lie low man

Ebrahim :
THank you , Saleh
I need this words certainly .....
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وَيْكَ يا مَنْ رَامَ تَقْييدَ الفَلَك أىُّ نَجْمٍ في السَّما يَخْضَعُ لَك
وطنُ الْحُرِّ سَمًا لا تُمْتَلَك والفتى الحرُّ بِأُفْقِهِ مَلَك
لا عَدَا يا أرضَ مِصْــرٍ بِكى عَاد إنَّنا دُونَ حِمَاكِى أجمعين
لكِ يا مصــرُ السَّلامة وسلامًا يا بلادى
إنْ رَمَى الدهرُ سِهَامَه أتَّقِيها بفؤادى

واسْلَمِى في كُلِّ حين
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مُساهمةموضوع: رد: My narration : Strange Affair   3/6/2010, 11:23 am

ههههههههههههههههههه
ماشي يا سيدى
عسسسل و الله



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وَيْكَ يا مَنْ رَامَ تَقْييدَ الفَلَك أىُّ نَجْمٍ في السَّما يَخْضَعُ لَك
وطنُ الْحُرِّ سَمًا لا تُمْتَلَك والفتى الحرُّ بِأُفْقِهِ مَلَك
لا عَدَا يا أرضَ مِصْــرٍ بِكى عَاد إنَّنا دُونَ حِمَاكِى أجمعين
لكِ يا مصــرُ السَّلامة وسلامًا يا بلادى
إنْ رَمَى الدهرُ سِهَامَه أتَّقِيها بفؤادى

واسْلَمِى في كُلِّ حين
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مُساهمةموضوع: رد: My narration : Strange Affair   3/6/2010, 11:34 am

Chapter
7 :" Start New Life "
Ebrahim : I need to sleep ....
Which room I
can sleep in it ?
Saleh : here !! behind you !!
Ebrahim : Thank
you !
At 4:00 am
Saleh : Ebrahim wake up !! wake up !! wake for
Elfajr prayer ...
Ebrahim in drowsy : OOOOOOOOk
and he back to
sleep
Saleh : I said wake !! and hits him on his leg ..
Ebrahim :
Okaaaaaaaaaaaay ..
Ebrahim and Saleh pray Elfajr and back to their
rest ...
In 9:00 am
Ebrahim : I've to wear my cloth ..
Saleh :
me , too .
Ebrahim : I'll go to my work , Where are you going ??
Saleh
: What's wrong with you man , I work with you !
In exclamation :
what !!!! You're a cook ?
Saleh : Yes , In the same hotel ...
Ebrahim
: Who tell you ?
Saleh : " Mounir " tell me before you come ..
Ebrahim
: Ok !! Ok !!
And they went to the Work !!
In the hotel : There
was a celebrate Of Open the Hotel , Do not Forget It's New !
Ebrahim :
I've to present the food .
Saleh : Ok !! Go and hurry ?
After
present
Ebrahim : Stop in his place and said " Wooooooooooooooow " ?

___________________

Characters : Ebrahim - Sandra - Saleh

"
Beginning Romance "

Ebrahim : WoooooW !!

Ebrahim saw a
beautiful women . She's pretty and brilliant women ..

He peer and
stare at her as he's never seen a women ..

He was amazed , his
heart is gonna break out .?

And he's confident as she is the
women he 'll be glad with her ....

And he cannot prevent
himself From talking with her ..

Ebrahim : Hey !!

Sandra :
Excuse me !!

Ebrahim In smiling :I said hey !! hello !!

Sandra
: Hey !! ........ What ??

Ebrahim : I...I....How...Why do you
stand alone ?? How could it be that a lovely women like you stand alone
?? are you married ? are you ...?

Sandra stop him and said :
It's not your matter ?

and she left

Ebrahim looked at her
and start laughing about this situation .....

And said : So
Cool .... and Cruel

When he back home , and unusual he 's So
happy ....

Saleh : What happened ?? I see you Fabulous and you'll
faint from happy ?

What's going on ?

Ebrahim : I found my
dream women , saleh ?

Saleh In exclamation : What ?? Finally ,
Are you kiding me ?? When ?

Where ?? How ?? So what ?? I'm so
eager to hear this result ...

Ebrahim laughed and said : Hold on,
Wait man ? Tahke it easy .

He Dizzy and said : She was a
fantastic women . I feel her . I met her in the celebrate .. After
presenting the food ..

I greet her , but she was rude , she left
me and said " It's not your matter ?? " and laughed again ...

Saleh
: Why did she said taht ?

Ebrahim laughed and said : Cause I
said " Why do you stand alone "
and they laughed so much ...

Saleh
: She 's so fool !

Ebrahim : No !! Don't say that again .. She's
an awesome women !!
And I promise you she'll be my wife ....

Saleh
: Yes Yes , I think that is Love at first sight ....


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Be continued , guys .


" Disappointed "

After 2 weeks

Saleh : What's
wrong with you , man ? you're so puzzled !!

Ebrahim : am I ? I
don't think so ............ he smiled and said " I'm a big liar , yes
I'm so annoyed , saleh ......

Saleh : So get rid of your pain to
me ....

Ebrahim : Ok . I .... You're so curious , Saleh !

Saleh
: No , I'm not a curious . I'm your friend nearly your brother .... I
know you for along time ... but you know , I don't want to know what's
wrong with you .... I'm grateful ..... I've to sleep .

In excited
Ebrahim said : Stop !! I know you're so close to me !! I gonna tell you
, but sit and stop this bullshit !!

Saleh : I'm all listening .
but before you say anything ...I know what's wrong with you ..... This
women maked your mind busy and you even don't know that ... I know you
eager to this women ..... be patient and contented .

Do you know
what's her name ?

Ebrahim : Oh .... No I don't know , it ......
How did I forget something like this , I'm so fool !

Saleh
laughed and said : How did you forget this ?? Are you crazy ?
you
....... and you ...................

Ebrahim in anger : Stop
blaming me for this ..... she didn't give me a chance , she walked away
.....

Saleh : Ok . calm down ... Let's go to the work , Maybe we
find her in the hotel .

Ebrahim: I wish .....

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be
continued

" Sandra , too ? "

In Sandra house

Sandra :
She's an American Women , She's 31 years old ..... She's not

marry
because she didn't find the great man yet
, She's from New york

. She's so rich and she lived in a palace
.... She's not Islamic . She's a Jewess ....

In her house

Karla
: Good morning , Sandra !

Sandra you are un normal This days .
You look so busy and uneasy ...
What's new , Sandra ?

Sandra :
No thing , mam ... I'm good
What's new of what ??

Karla :
Sandra ! don't deny you're Independent and separate of your real world
..... Your friends and parties ?
Oh.. look who come !! It's Kevin
your cousin .
Sandra : Oh !! I don't like him . he's so stupid and
foolish ... In addition he's so rude ..

Please , mam . Tell him
that I'm not here .... And say this : Leave Sandra alone ... I give up
from him ... I don't like him . I'll go to have my lunch .

Karla :
Sandra ! I'm sorry ... the servants will absent for a week , and I
didn't have a new servants yet ..


Sandra : good !! I'll have
it in " Sea Shore " restaurant ...... and said " maybe I find him .... "

Karla
: what ? Did you say something ?

Sandra : What !! No No ......
Bye
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be continued

Second meeting

On her way
.. she talked to herself ...


What
Sandra ?


Are you love again ?

Did you forget what happen to you from the first love ?

No .... back to your home

but
I wanna to see him ...


and I'm so
hungry ...


She arrived in the
restaurant and have a seat ..


Ebrahim :
Gosh !!!!!


Oh , my god !!

Saleh ! Look ! Saleh ! oh , Saleh !!

Saleh : What ???? OOOOOOOOOh !! what a beautiful women ??

Ebrahim : Shut up !

Ebrahim
: Oh , my god .... I don't believe my self I see her again ?


Saleh : Now ! you know what will you do ?

Ebrahim : Yes , I 'll prepared the new order .

and leaved saleh ..

Saleh
: This man is Mad ?

and I said that
before...


Sandra : Where's he ?
I swear I 'll go to him and apologize about my rude in the
last time before .


But I want to see
him right now . !


And she hint him
present the food again in the table 5


Sandra
clubing and said : Hey waiter ....


Ebrahim
: in your Obey ...


Sandra : I want a
big meal you know it ?


Ebrahim : Of
course , and .... ?


Sandra : Big Tart
for me only after lunch , OK ?


Ebrahim :
O.K


I ' ll prepare it in 5 minute ..

Sandra : O.k ... Hurry back !

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be continued





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وَيْكَ يا مَنْ رَامَ تَقْييدَ الفَلَك أىُّ نَجْمٍ في السَّما يَخْضَعُ لَك
وطنُ الْحُرِّ سَمًا لا تُمْتَلَك والفتى الحرُّ بِأُفْقِهِ مَلَك
لا عَدَا يا أرضَ مِصْــرٍ بِكى عَاد إنَّنا دُونَ حِمَاكِى أجمعين
لكِ يا مصــرُ السَّلامة وسلامًا يا بلادى
إنْ رَمَى الدهرُ سِهَامَه أتَّقِيها بفؤادى

واسْلَمِى في كُلِّ حين
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مُساهمةموضوع: رد: My narration : Strange Affair   3/6/2010, 11:41 am

" A date with hema "

He prepared the best food
that he ever prepared before ... and went to sandra ...

Ebrahim :
Here you are !

Sandra : Thanks !

And a moment of calm and
they looked for each other ...

Sandra : I'm so sorry about the
last time .... I was so rude I know that I was sanded there you
remember me ? ..

Ebrahim in himself : What ? My thoughts was so X
- rated from thinking of you damsel ...

Sandra : Mr ... Mr ?
hey you !

Ebrahim : Oh , I'm so sorry what did we talk about , Oh
.. No No Don't worry about that ....
Sandra : My cousin " Kevin "
annoyed me a lot , and I left him and come here the last time , and you
came to talk to and I was so angry ...

Ebrahim : It's O.k . I've
to go and prepared this order .

Sandra : Oh , Can I see you again
in a calm place ?
Ebrahim : Oh you take this question from my mouth
hhhhhhhhhhh

Ebrahim : yes , you can ..... I'll meet you in the "
Peaceful garden " You Know it ?

Sandra : Sure ..... Of course .!

Ebrahim
: O ........

The boss : Ebrahim ! Ebrahim ! What are you doing
there ? Come here !!

Saleh : Oh , man ... god be with you !

Sandra
: Oh ?

Ebrahim : Oh , Calamity ..... Oh , god .... please god
save me .. I know I'll have no craft ...

O.k , I'm Coming



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Be
continued ...

" Leave me alone "

The Boss :
You're so careless , and this is Unexactly ...

If you make this
mistake again I'll fire you , understood?

Ebrahim :
I'm so sorry , master !

In the sametime " Kevin " come to the
restaurant to see " Sandra " and we know she doesn't like him ...

Kevin
: Hey ! Sandra !

Sandra :
Oh , shit ! What are you doing here ? Ileaved you in my palace and you
follow me to here ? You are so Curious ..

Kevin : Forget it !who
is this guy ?

Sandra : You're so snoopy .... leave me alone

Kevin
: No , you know I love you so much , who is this guy ? I'm not gonna
repeat again !

Sandra : Leave my hand , you're not love me you
love my money , my body and my dad's companies , you're just an insect
not any more , I hate you so much more you think . She said in Crying
and anger .....

Saleh
: Oh , Ebrahim !! look over there ,your darling !!

Ebrahim : Oh
my god ! who is this guy ??

Saleh : you still wondering ? GO!!!!

Ebrahim
: You're right .

Sandra : No no I'm not coming with you ever
..... never

Ebrahim : Hey ! leave her alone !

Kevin : It's
not your matter gay !

Ebrahim : Gay !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
What
did you say ?

Kevin : I said ..........

Kevin
not gonna to say the word .... and Hema beat him .....

Kevin :
OOOOOOh !! My nose !! you son of .......
Damn you !!

Sandra :
Aooo ! Gosh you're so strong ......

The
boss : Ebrahim !! get out from this restaurant !! this people need more
respect ! Get Out !

Ebrahim : What , But .......

Boss
: I said Go out ! I'm not gonna to get more troubles .....

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be continued

No Career

Ebrahim : I have no craft no career now !!
What
can I do now ? I lose the best job I ever had !! ..... Oh god help me
I'm begging you !

Sandra : run after Ebrahim and said : Wait !!
Wait you wait .... !!

Ebrahim : What now ?

Sandra with
hard breathe : Stop .... you're so fast , What's going on ???

Ebrahim
in exclamation : what's going on !! I lost my job , miss !

Sandra
: So ..... ?

Ebrahim : I will go bust ...

Sandra : You'll
not go bust ...

Ebrahim : What ? How ?


Sandra : I gonna tell you , but
not here ... In the same place at 7 O'clock

Ebrahim : Where ?!!

Sandra
: Did you Just forget ? In the peaceful garden ...

Ebrahim : Oh
!! but what about you cousin that called " Kevin " ?

Sandra : Oh !
He is bad guy ! and I don't like him ! he killed my first lover ... you
can call him " Landon " ..
But he has a big big safety on the
government and they give him the innocence from the prison after I
thank god about that ...

Ebrahim : Oh! I'm so sorry , It's gonna
be me next ..



Sandra laughed and said : No no .... It's not
gonna happen again ...

Ebrahim : Oh !! It doesn't matter !! For
you !

Sandra :
O.K !! 7 O'clock ...

Ebrahim : yes ... bye .

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be
continued

" So Peaceful Date "

Saleh : Ebrahim !! you're here !
I guess you never came again .

Ebrahim : No man , you're out
from this miss ... you're my friend .

Saleh : Ok , What's new ?

Ebrahim
: I agree with her to have a date .

Saleh : A Date ????

Ebrahim
: Ya , a date . what's strange ?

Saleh : What about " Kevin " ? I
think I'll come with you I afraid of him ..

he is gonna hurt
you , I swear !!

Ebrahim : No no , and he said the story about
Sandra's first love .

Saleh : Oh !! I said that he is so evil and
he is gonna kill you ..

Ebrahim : no no , that's impossible !

Saleh
: I don't think so ...

Ebrahim : Ok , I agree to die for her !

Saleh
: ??? , you're so crazy about her be careful Ebrahim ?

Ebrahim :
It's a little word to say .

Saleh : Ok ! What are you doing !?!

Ebrahim
: It's 5 O'clock .

Saleh : and ..... ?

Ebrahim : I'll go
to the shop and buy the best suit in it !

Saleh : Ebrahim , be
careful you have no career ...... not to spend much money ok ?

Ebrahim
: Of caurse , I know this .

Saleh : will you come again after
you buy the suit ?

Ebrahim : No , I'll go to any telephone
exchange and call " Mounir " .

I miss him so much .

Saleh :
OOOOOOOh " Mounir " ? I forget him at all ... send him my love !

Ebrahim
: Ok !

Saleh : Ebrahim !

Ebrahim : Oh , god ? What ??

Saleh
: there's a Pusy man next to our house , buy one for her .

Ebrahim
: thank you I'll do this , bye .

Saleh : Ebrahim !

Ebrahim
: I'll hurt you .. what's wrong with you ?


Saleh : There's
no god but Allah ...

Ebrahim : Mohammed is his messanger .. bye
bye .

Saleh : Ebrahim !

Ebrahim : ???

Saleh : No
thing , hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Ebrahim : damn you !

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be
continued

" Romantic ... Dinner "

After buying the
suit , Ebrahim went to the telephone exchange .. to cal Mounir .
Ebrahim
: Telephone , please ?
Women : Go a head ..
Ebrahim : Thanks ....
come on Mounir answer the phone ........ Hello !!
A women voice :
Hello ! Who is talking ?
Ebrahim : It's Ebrahim ... Mounir's friend ,
Is he here ?
A women voice : Yes , please wait for a minute ...
Someone
called " Ebrahim " !
Mounir : What ! Give me the phone ! Hello !
Hemaaa ? I miss you idiot ..
Ebrahim : Yes , me too .... How are
things ? who's this women ?
Mounir : aaaaaah , I'm fine .... It's ...
my wife " Mariah " .
Ebrahim : Congratulations Mounir , Have a happy
life ...
Mounir : What about yours ? What about your Craft .. ?
Ebrahim
: I have just a girl friend ... I'm going to see her right now ... and
.... and I lose my job !
Mounir : What a good and bad new ! I want to
come to you " hema " ?! With my wife .....
Ebrahim : Really !! It's
gonna be awesome .. Why not ? when ?
Mounir : I don't know when ...
So soon ... !
Ebrahim : What's the time now ?
Mounir : It's seven
o'clock ..
Ebrahim : What ? Goodbye now ?
Ebrahim ran to the
peaceful garden then he found Sandra waiting for him !
Ebrahim : I'm
so sorry .... but ....
Sandra : Don't apologize ... It's o.k
Let's
have a seat ...
Ebrahim : Ladies First ...
Sandra : Thank you ...
hhhhhhh .. I ..
Ebrahim : Would you like to eat or drink something
..?
Sandra : Maybe Later ..
Ebrahim : o.k come on ... talk with me
.
Sandra : Are you want to work ?
Ebrahim : Of , caurse ...
Sandra
: My dad has many companies , I'll take with him about that ...
Ebrahim
: That's kind of you .... thank you Sandra ...
Sandra : I'm yours
...
Ebrahim : Oh ! this is for you !
Sandra : Oh ! It's .... It's
so great ... thank you ... thank you so much ... I love flowers very
much , my room full of this ....
Ebrahim : Really !! I'll give you
one every day !
Shall we talk about you ?
Sandra : Yes , ask any
questions you need .
Ebrahim : Why are you here with me ?
Sandra :
What a strange question you ask me ? because .... cause I ... I don't
know !
Ebrahim : Maybe you love me ... or like me ...
Sandra : Ya !
Maybe ! Why are you here with me !!
Ebrahim : Because I really like
you ..
Sandra : Or ... love me ... Maybe yes .
Ebrahim : Maybe No !
Sandra
: So you love me for fun , right ? ... Excuse me !
Ebrahim : Stop
your foolish women .. Listen to me ! It's the first date for me , I have
never loved a women .. never ... If you leave me , I'll hate love for
the rest of my life ... when I saw you .. my life had changed . and I
love my life more than any time .
Sandra : I don't know what i say
... but many mans love me for my money and my body ... never love me for
my heart or my soul ... I feel that of you .... a man like " Kevin "
... he destroying me and .....
Ebrahim : Ok , Let's live life
normally without " Kevin " and many mans you talk about .. all right ..
Sandra
: all right .. I want to drink something .
Ebrahim : I told you that
but you refused . hhhhhh , Waiter ..
Sandra and Ebrahim spend a nice
time talking about themselves and their life ...
Sandra : Oh !! It's
eleven O'clock ... I have to go ..
Ebrahim : the time run so fast
... can I see you again ?
Sandra : 0579754332
Ebrahim : What ?
Sandra
repeat the numbers when she run away ... 0579754332 ..
A man drove a
car : Look out !!!!
Ebrahim : Sandra !
another man : she made an
accident , sir ?
!.... : that's Good


The passion Week

Ebrahim in tears : Sandra .. San
.. Sandra ! Oh , dear !
.........
you don't know what's the
meaning of a man tears .... Do you know ?! Of course not ... If you
really know you'll feel the emotions of Ebrahim ..
He cried out like
a baby that his mother left him without feeding him for 600 days ...
hhhhh

Ebrahim in terribly crying : Sandra ! what are you
watching guys ? Call the ambulance ....... Now ! Move on !!!!

*******************************
Kevin
: hmmmmmm .... tell me what happened .. Is she die or what ?
The
same man : No , sir ! she is alive ....... maybe she has just fainted
....

Kevin : why don't you kill her , god ? .... If she dies ,
I'll have a lot of money .... especially her father trust me a lot ...
Is he right ? Hahahahahahaha ...

the man : Of course , sir .....
and they 're giving more laugh ...
Kevin : wait a minute ! I'll call
her mother ... maybe she likes me as you ..

Oh ... hello

Karla
: mmm ? What ? are you in need for money ?
Kevin in vulpine : in the
circumstance I'll not reply ... but I would tell you that your daughter
made an accident ...

Karla : what ? Are you kidding me ?

Kevin
: what ! I'm not kidding ? ask Ebrahim .. ?

Karla : who .. Ebarm
... who's Ebarm ..?

Kevin : No No ... Ebrahim .. Ebrahim ... E .
b . r . a . h . i . m ....

Karla in anger : It doesn't matter ,
A_hole ..

Kevin : aaah ! I don't know him ask your crazy
daughter maybe she hangs with him ..

Karla : stop this rubbish
now , where's she ? I'll think over you you after this disaster .. !

Kevin
: all right .. mama ... I don't know where's she ....a ...m..... my
friend see it and come to me quickly ... I even didn't had the time to
ask him .. I felt so dizzy and he goes to get a doctor to me !

Karla
in exclamation : Really ? Oh , dear ! you .... finish this bye

*******************************
Santiago
: Hello !! ... Oh ! ... aunt " Karla " ! What's wrong why are you
crying ?

Karla : Santiago ! Dis embarrass me !! Sandra made an
accident !! I don't know what I should do ?

Santiago : What !
I'll come to you in 5 minutes !

******************************

Dr.
Jonathan : Are you domestic ?

Ebrahim : What ? .......

Dr
. Jonathan : Are you from her family ?

Ebrahim : yes .... no no ,
I'll be in . How is she ? please tell me the truth ...
Dr. Jonathan :
mmmmm , I'm so so sorry .. but ..

Ebrahim : but what .... no ,
she ...

Dr. Jonathan : don't panic in this method .. She gets
losing memory ! and ... and her elbow has just little broke ... I'm so
sorry ... she can't back her memory easily ... I .... Sir .... Sir !!
... nurse .. Come over here !!

*********************************
when
this calamities .. Kevin live an unbelievable ecstasy and gallows
humor ..

Kevin : I'll give you 700 dollars a day for this funny
joy , but do you think I'll be a dubious .... I mean maybe when Sandra
recovers .. she'll accuse me of this crime ...

The same man : I
think so ... If I were her , I'd suspect of you the first one ... but
I'm confident that she won't convict you of this crime .... If she made
this , you would say " Oh , It's an accident " ...
And they get more
and more laugh .. I don't know why ?

IF I were you reader , I'd
wonder ...... " who is this man ? "

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continued

[center]" The Same bad week "

In the next day ...

this
man : Sir !

Kevin :" Oooooh ! " he said it drowsy .. What are
you doing here ?

this man : just open the door ! I have a good
news ..

Kevin in haste : come on ! come on ! ....

Tell me
what you hide ?

this man : a perfect news .. Ebrahim had a
neurotic when he knew that Sandra had lost her memory ...

Kevin :
mmmmm !! Really ? ... Did Sandra lose her memory ?

This man :
Yea ....

Kevin : So I'll be safe ... in any case I'm out of
danger ...



Santiago : Are you all right ?

Sandra
: who are you ?

Dr.Jonathan : Please , Leave now !

Karla :
No , I want to talk with my daughter at once ... please doctor "
Jonathan " .. for my sake ...

Jonathan : ok . but hurry please ..

Karla
: all right ... she went to Sandra's bed and said " Sandra ! dear ! how
are you ? "

Sandra whispered : who are you ?

Karla : I'm
.... I'm your mother " Karla " .. don't you remember me ?

Santiago
: are you understand ? Jonathan says a losing memory ...

Karla :
but not for good ...

Santiago : I don't know ... I gonna ask him
now !

Karla : Thanks ..

Santiago : Jonathan ! does Sandra
cure of lose memory or for good ?

Jonathan : Perhaps ....

Santiago
: perhaps what ? give me an answer make me ease ...

Jonathan :
If you try with her to .... back up her .... for instance remember her
about the last thing she had done or the persons she met them at last
time or her .... lover ..... Do you know him ?

Santiago : no , I
don't .... but all I know that he died ..

Jonathan : but there's a
man look Arabian ... Maybe he can't understand my language at all ...
maybe some public words ..

Santiago : no , I don't know about him
..

Jonathan : he fainted when he knew about Sandra ..

Santiago
: what ! a man fainted ? Can I see him ?

Jonathan : Yes , but
after he recovers ... he spent fainted for along time ... he'll recover
after one or two hours ..

Satiago : ok ... but can I see his face
, please ?

Jonathan : yes , sure ... Follow me , this is him .

Santiago
: mmmm ! he looks arabian really . but I don't think she loves him ...
Can I see his personality card ...

Jonathan : yes , Just a second
... this is it ...

Santiago : mmmmm ! as I think of ... Sandra
is Jewess ... he's Islamic man .... never love each other ... forget it
...

A nurse : Doctor " Jonathan " a minute please ..

Jonathan
: I gotta go now " Santiago " ..

Santiago : Sure , go a head ...

Santiago
looked at " Ebrahim " and said " What behind you guy ? "

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" Hardship "

Santiago : How are things
now ?

Karla : Like what you see ...

Jonathan : Timeout
... You must leave now ... you can came in the next visitation .

Sandra
: who are you ? where am I ? and beginning cry out and shout ..

D.J
: Out ! Out Please ... Nurse , nurse .... Come over her ma'am give me
this injection .

Nurse : This is it .

********************

Karla
: Oh , dear ! ...

A telephone or a phone ringing ...

Santiago
: It must be her dad ...

Karla : Oh! Maybe I forgot to tell him
.... ahh , Hello !

Brandon : Hello ! Where are you ?! Where's
Sandra ?!

Karla : Who tell you ? It must be the Idiot " Kevin "

Brandon
: It doesn't matter who , where's she ?

Karla : in a hospital
... what's it name "Santi " ?

Santiago : It's called " Chicago "

Karla
: Oh ! It's Chicago , Brandon .

Brandon : Ok , I'm coming now
.

Santiago : Oh , Jonathan .... What's wrong ?

Jonathan :
We gave her an injection to calm her down .

Karla : Oh , my
daughter !

Santy : Just a second please .

D.J : Sure ...

Santy
: Is this man recovers or not ?

D.J : Yes , he has just
recovered , Follow me if you want to see him .


Santiago :
Sure !

Karla : Where are you going ?

Santiago : a....
a....

Jonathan : he'll see the payment ..

Santiago : Yes ,
As he said " Payment " ..

Karla : O.k , Don't be late ..

Santiago
: Good thinker ...

Jonathan : I used to be in this situations ..

Santy
: Here he's .... I'll go on ...

Jonathan : Santiago !! Be calm
with him , please .

Santiago : Sure !

Ebrahim : Hi !

Santiago
: Hi ! You are Ebrahim , right ?

Ebrahim : exactly ... who are
you then ?

Santiago : I'm Sandra's best friend from the child
hood ..

Ebrahim : Oh ! please ease me how is she now ?

Santiago
: Bad !! Can you do any thing ? she can't know any body .... even you ,
can you ?

Ebrahim : I wish I could . I must see her right now ..

Santiago
: what are you doing ? Stay here , Are you nuts ? Dr.Jonathan said "
you must stay in bed " .

Ebrahim : But ...

Santiago : I'll
buy you a moving chair .

Ebrahim : Thanks .

Santiago : Ok
, Tell me now ... what's between you and Sandra ?

Ebrahim :
What ?

Santiago : You're Islamic , right ?

Ebrahim : Of
course , and I proud Of being an Islamic man ..... So ?

Santy :
Do you Know Sandra well ?

Ebrahim : Yes , I love her .

Santy
: But Is she loves you ?

Ebrahim : Of course .. So much , More
than you think ...

Santiago : Is she know your religion ?

Ebrahim
: Why ? I don't think so ... She must be like me Islamic women , If she
hadn't been an Islamic , she wouldn't have fallen in love with me .

Santiago
: but she Isn't an Islamic ..

Ebrahim : Whatever , I can marry
her in any religion , I think she is christian . However I can marry her
..

Santiago : Really ? No , she isn't a christian ... She's a
Jewess ..

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be continued ...



[/center]



التوقيع الخاص بلعضو














وَيْكَ يا مَنْ رَامَ تَقْييدَ الفَلَك أىُّ نَجْمٍ في السَّما يَخْضَعُ لَك
وطنُ الْحُرِّ سَمًا لا تُمْتَلَك والفتى الحرُّ بِأُفْقِهِ مَلَك
لا عَدَا يا أرضَ مِصْــرٍ بِكى عَاد إنَّنا دُونَ حِمَاكِى أجمعين
لكِ يا مصــرُ السَّلامة وسلامًا يا بلادى
إنْ رَمَى الدهرُ سِهَامَه أتَّقِيها بفؤادى

واسْلَمِى في كُلِّ حين
الرجوع الى أعلى الصفحة اذهب الى الأسفل
معاينة صفحة البيانات الشخصي للعضو
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مُساهمةموضوع: رد: My narration : Strange Affair   3/6/2010, 11:42 am

Alas !


A
man and a women behind the door

Saleh : who is there ?

A
man : Is Ebrahim here ?

Saleh : No , I don't know where's he ...
who are you ? .. please wait I'm going to open the door ..

Hello !
I think you are not foreign , I think you are Arabian ..

The
Man : Yes , I'm . I'm Ebrahim's Old friend and this is my wife " Mariah "
... I'm " Mounir "

Saleh : Ow !
you're Mounir , Come On In ... you well ... Have a seat , please !

Mounir
: Thanks !

Saleh : Ebrahim talked with me about you !

Mounir
: where's he ?

Saleh : I don't know . he has been away since he
had a Date with a women called " Sandra " .

Mounir : Oh , my god !
.. he spent a way for a long time , he talked with me and
said that he found his dream woman and he was going to see her then ...

Mariah
: Oh my god ! , I hope he is fine ... Is he has a mobile phone ?

Saleh
: yes , but I made a trials ... It was closed ...

Mariah :
Please , made a new trial maybe he ...

Mounir : Shut up !

Mariah whispered : I'm sorry , I'm not going to say a word
again ...


Mounir : try again please !

Saleh : O.k , wait a little
while .. I'm going to pick up my phone .

Mounir : Go !

Saleh
was worried when he went to his room to pick up his phone to talk to
Ebrahim . If he is fine , Saleh will scold him ... and If he had an
accident , he would be very sad ..

Mounir : Come on ! try !

Saleh
: I've a great idea !
you try !

Mounir : No , You try !

Saleh : I can no..

Mariah
: Oh shut up ! I'll try ... Stop this bullshit now ! Silence !

Mariah
cried out : A bell !

Saleh : What ! give it to me !



Ebrahim
: Santiago , please can you pick up my phone ?

Santy : Of cau..

Ebrahim
: hurry please !
Oh ! It's Saleh ... He must be worried ! Hello !

Saleh
: You're an Idiot ... where are you ? I
can't Imagine how foolish that you are ! I'm sure tjat you're in a nice
place now with your sweetheart ! Have a nice time , drinking , eating ,
made love .... and I'm here wondering about you and firing of thinking
about you ! you're ..

Ebrahim : I'm in the hospital of Chicago
and I'm in bed with tablets and injections , and my sweetheart that you
scornful her , she has been in bed for 2 weeks ... Can't know any body
... even me ..
are you easing now ?

A SILENT WHILE !

mounir shocked Saleh
but he was shocked ..

Mounir : Why are you quiet ! give me the
damn phone !
hello ! Ebrahim what's wrong !

Ebrahim : I'm in
the hospital

Mariah shocked her husband but he was shocked as
well !

Mariah : what's happening ! give me the phone !

Mariah
: hello ! I'm Mariah , Mounir's wife ... what's going on !

Ebrahim
: I'm in the hospital

Mariah :

Saleh :
give me the phone ! Ebrahim , I'm so sorry about that ... I'm the idiot
... I'm sorry ... I'll be with you in five minutes !!

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wait
for new !



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وَيْكَ يا مَنْ رَامَ تَقْييدَ الفَلَك أىُّ نَجْمٍ في السَّما يَخْضَعُ لَك
وطنُ الْحُرِّ سَمًا لا تُمْتَلَك والفتى الحرُّ بِأُفْقِهِ مَلَك
لا عَدَا يا أرضَ مِصْــرٍ بِكى عَاد إنَّنا دُونَ حِمَاكِى أجمعين
لكِ يا مصــرُ السَّلامة وسلامًا يا بلادى
إنْ رَمَى الدهرُ سِهَامَه أتَّقِيها بفؤادى

واسْلَمِى في كُلِّ حين
الرجوع الى أعلى الصفحة اذهب الى الأسفل
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مُساهمةموضوع: رد: My narration : Strange Affair   4/6/2010, 1:16 pm

ايه مش لا قيه ردود يعنى

انا هحط تانى ع فكرة



التوقيع الخاص بلعضو














وَيْكَ يا مَنْ رَامَ تَقْييدَ الفَلَك أىُّ نَجْمٍ في السَّما يَخْضَعُ لَك
وطنُ الْحُرِّ سَمًا لا تُمْتَلَك والفتى الحرُّ بِأُفْقِهِ مَلَك
لا عَدَا يا أرضَ مِصْــرٍ بِكى عَاد إنَّنا دُونَ حِمَاكِى أجمعين
لكِ يا مصــرُ السَّلامة وسلامًا يا بلادى
إنْ رَمَى الدهرُ سِهَامَه أتَّقِيها بفؤادى

واسْلَمِى في كُلِّ حين
الرجوع الى أعلى الصفحة اذهب الى الأسفل
معاينة صفحة البيانات الشخصي للعضو
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مُساهمةموضوع: رد: My narration : Strange Affair   4/6/2010, 1:18 pm

No pain No life


Kevin : OOh !! how beautiful is the water ! Clean
Clean !

a man that we don't know him until now : Sir , I'm out
can you open the door ?

Kevin : I'm taking a shower , goon !

the
same man : okay , I'll come in your leisure time !

Kevin : oh !
stop man ! I'm going to op ... oh ! shit ! are you easing now ? .... Ow
...

the same man : what's going on , sir ? are you okay ?

Kevin
: no , I'm not okay , I fall to the ground Idiot !

Me : you know
, If I were him , I'd get rid of this rude craft .. Kevin is so rude ,
you know something , he is the big Idiot !

Kevin : I think I gave
you my flat's keys get in !

And he got in but he was Idiot as
well ... he got in the wrong place ..... ya ! to the bathroom !

Kevin
: GET OUT
! I said get in the flat not
to the bath .. I'm naked you !! .... Oh ! It's so hurt ! Dear me !

Me
: You do deserve this !







Brandon
: Sandra are you okay ?

Karla : shhhh ! she's sleeping . come
on we've to get out of here !



Santiago
: She's Jewess !

Ebrahim : Really ! good heavens ! I don't care
... whatever I can marry it !!

Santiago rampages and said in
anger : get rid of this scatty Ideas ! those are Arabian people like
scrap ! they have stupid habits and ideas ! they are savage , impious
and for sure you've no dept ... I ... I don't like you and I don't like
your kind and your species ! shame on you ! all of you !

He
slammed the door in rage and walked away to the garden ... and Ebrahim
... he still staring at the slammed door in exclamation !!
I'm not
blaming him Santiago said what was inside his deep heart in vain ..
Ebrahim didn't has the force and the squint to prevent Santiago of
saying this bad really bad words !!

Ebrahim yawned and said :
I'll do revenge later but now I'm so tired and I want to take a great
rest and ... slee...

Saleh
: Please nurse , where's the patient " Ebrahim Fathy " ?

The
nurse : Oh ! the Arabian man !! he is so cute , brilliant , really
attractive and so smart ..

Saleh : I'm not asking you about his
seems and adjectives , I'm asking you where's he ?

the nurse :
this man that standing at the garden is so peculiar and mad , he's
acting like a mad dog ! I'm going to tell you a secret , Came closer !
He's prejudiced to Zion , I beware you of him , he hates Arabic people
... especially women ! Take care of you girl !

Saleh : Oh ! It's
not my gir..

Mounir : It's my wife .. can you tell us where's
Ebrahim ?

the nurse : Oh ! " Ebrahim Fathy " ?

Saleh : Oh ,
Allah ! yes he is !

the
nurse : Floor number 4 room number 18 ..

Mariah : Finally ! thanks ma'am !

the nurse :
you well girl !!

Mariah
: oh ! she's so gabby !

The two men and the women arrived at the
room . Saleh cried out and said : Ebrahim ! oh , poor brother ! Ebrahim
! Ebrahiiiiiim !

Mounir : Wake up , man !

Ebrahin
: Sandra !!

Mariah : who's Sandra ? I'm Mariah !

Ebrahim
: Oh , Mounir I missed you so much , How are you ? give me a big hug ! I
missed you guy come over here !
Saleh come here ! how tall you are !
I can't catch you ! get down I can't hug you !

Ebrahim : you're Mariah , are you ?

Mariah :
ye..

Brandon : Where's this son of






Be
continued



التوقيع الخاص بلعضو














وَيْكَ يا مَنْ رَامَ تَقْييدَ الفَلَك أىُّ نَجْمٍ في السَّما يَخْضَعُ لَك
وطنُ الْحُرِّ سَمًا لا تُمْتَلَك والفتى الحرُّ بِأُفْقِهِ مَلَك
لا عَدَا يا أرضَ مِصْــرٍ بِكى عَاد إنَّنا دُونَ حِمَاكِى أجمعين
لكِ يا مصــرُ السَّلامة وسلامًا يا بلادى
إنْ رَمَى الدهرُ سِهَامَه أتَّقِيها بفؤادى

واسْلَمِى في كُلِّ حين
الرجوع الى أعلى الصفحة اذهب الى الأسفل
معاينة صفحة البيانات الشخصي للعضو
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مُساهمةموضوع: رد: My narration : Strange Affair   4/6/2010, 1:18 pm


The third eye !

Brandon : Oh ! you motherfucker
, what did you do to my daughter ?

Ebrahim : Stop ! stop ! what
are you doing . get away from me .

Karla : Brandon ! stop !
people can see !

Saleh : hey hey ! let him ! let him now ! you
are not understand any thing !

Kevin : but I'm understand !

Ebrahim
: Oh , you so daft ! look Mr.Brandon he's the big reason of your
daughter's accident . I'm sure .

Brandon : oh, you are so smart ?
Do I have to believe you ? are you think I'm crazy or something ! he's
my nephew ! he didn't do any bad thing to me !! but you .... you're
scamp ... you're just a bug I can behead you and no body will blame me !


Mariah : Haaaay !! I've to talk now ! Ebrahim is out of this
puddle ! He did a favor to your daughter , I'm in line with you that he
was scatty , an

Ebrahim : What ?!

Saleh : shhh listen !

Mariah
: And he was so fool , yes but I think he saved your daughter's soul ,
as I hear the all hospital talk about them !! but I think he loved her
so , and before you ask hem about this , you've to ask your daughter ..
If she said that he was mistaken , It's will be your way to behead him
like what you said !! under state this chaos , It's a wacky stuff !
Calm
down , please !
Mounir : Where was this proficient before ?! Are you
my wife ?!

Mariah :Yea ! Experience is the mother of wisdom ..

Kevin
: Oh , you look persuade of this bullshit , she's a lair , this guy
doesn't love her , he wants her money no more no less , he tricks her ,
uncle .. I'm sure !

Brandon : come on Kevin , come on Karla , we
aren't respect ourselves cause we're talking with this rampant pieces of
shit !

Dr.Jonathan : Mr.Brandon ! hurry ! Sandra got back her
memory !

Ebrahim : Oh , dear ! I've to go ...

Kevin : No ,
I think It's better to you if you stayed here ... bye bye dear !

Ebrahim
: Don't even think in your mind that I'll slang you , I'm Islamic .... a
great Islamic ...

Kevin : wow wow wow ! So fuck you !

Brandon
, Karla , Kevin and nurse went to Sandra's room but they didn't find
her !

Karla : Oh , Sandra ! Sandra ! Sandra , Where's she ?
where's my daughter ?!

Brandon : you daft , where's my daughter
?!

Dr.Jonathan : Please , Mr.Brandon get away from me ! get your
hands back to your body ! I let her over here ?!!! Nurse ! Come on ! We
have to find her quickly !

Nurse : please ma'am ! did you see a
woman wear a rose dress with flowers ..

Nurse 2 : O , she must be
Sandra ! Hema's lover , I saw her once in her room ! She's a pretty
woman ..

Dr.Jonathan : Oh , my god ! a gabby woman ! ma'am please
, It';s an Important stuff ! you must help us !

Nurse : Did you
see her in this way ?

Nurse : No no , How can I see her ?! Ask
the up nurse maybe she saw her !

Dr.Jonathan : Oh , shit ! thanks
, come on ! Remind me to punish her after this noise she's so gabby !

Nurse
laughed an said : O.k , doctor , of course I'll do that ..

*********

Saleh
: And I come here .. my heart didn't stop beating ...... I saw ...
Ebrahim , Ebrahim , I'm talking to you ! what's wrong with you ?!

Ebrahim
: Sandra ?!

Saleh : What ?! where ?!

Sandra
: Ebrahim ! Ebrahim !

Mounir : Oh , god .. she's awesome !

Mariah
: yes , so stop it !




be continued ...



التوقيع الخاص بلعضو














وَيْكَ يا مَنْ رَامَ تَقْييدَ الفَلَك أىُّ نَجْمٍ في السَّما يَخْضَعُ لَك
وطنُ الْحُرِّ سَمًا لا تُمْتَلَك والفتى الحرُّ بِأُفْقِهِ مَلَك
لا عَدَا يا أرضَ مِصْــرٍ بِكى عَاد إنَّنا دُونَ حِمَاكِى أجمعين
لكِ يا مصــرُ السَّلامة وسلامًا يا بلادى
إنْ رَمَى الدهرُ سِهَامَه أتَّقِيها بفؤادى

واسْلَمِى في كُلِّ حين
الرجوع الى أعلى الصفحة اذهب الى الأسفل
معاينة صفحة البيانات الشخصي للعضو
Mrs.English
مشرفة أقسام الأفلام
مشرفة أقسام الأفلام


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مُساهمةموضوع: رد: My narration : Strange Affair   4/6/2010, 1:20 pm

ان شاء الله اللى جايين انا هبدا اكتب باه بايدى ع الجهاز
الباقى ده كلو كنت كتباه ع الجهاز قبل كده ف منتدى تانى
سلاااااااااااااام
وبجد مستنيه حد قرا القصه ويقولى رايو ايه ؟



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وَيْكَ يا مَنْ رَامَ تَقْييدَ الفَلَك أىُّ نَجْمٍ في السَّما يَخْضَعُ لَك
وطنُ الْحُرِّ سَمًا لا تُمْتَلَك والفتى الحرُّ بِأُفْقِهِ مَلَك
لا عَدَا يا أرضَ مِصْــرٍ بِكى عَاد إنَّنا دُونَ حِمَاكِى أجمعين
لكِ يا مصــرُ السَّلامة وسلامًا يا بلادى
إنْ رَمَى الدهرُ سِهَامَه أتَّقِيها بفؤادى

واسْلَمِى في كُلِّ حين
الرجوع الى أعلى الصفحة اذهب الى الأسفل
معاينة صفحة البيانات الشخصي للعضو
 
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